You send shivers down my spine,
In a good way.
When you touch my bare skin,
It's Euphoric.
You're part of me forever,
I am your wife.
You are my reason to live,
And you are my husband.
-Tokyo Butterfly
You send shivers down my spine, In a good way. When you touch my bare skin, It's Euphoric. You're part of me forever, I am your wife. You are my reason to live, And you are my husband. -Tokyo Butterfly |

Author's Comments
Written for my husband - who hates poetry. Our anniversay was a few days before.
The first line of each verse also make up their own poem as does the second line of each verse. 12th Sept 2009 Sharing is allowed AS LONG as I am credited "Tokyo Butterfly Deviantart"as the writer. No edits of ANY kind allowed. Comments
Sweetie this rocks! You got me with this one! I am featuring it on my Front Page under Art That Touches My Heart. hugs, katti a humble poet An Angel of Vengeance -- come and nestle thy wounded spirit in the feathers of my oasis and feel it feel the softest lightest touch of soothing hear the gentlest barely audible words of one who through them is renewing all that life has cast thy way, this I vow, each night on Wow! Thank you so much. That REALLY means a lot to me.
-- Check out my gallery @ [link] :thumb55092509: Me either. He puts me off writing to be honest. I'll write something and he's not keen on it so it gets scrapped as I then think that it probably isn't that good to begin with.
-- Check out my gallery @ [link] :thumb55092509: It's really nice to hear such encouraging comments. It's inspired me to write more because I can turn to your group to show poetry and hopefully the group will help me decide what's good and what's not. Winner all round!
-- Check out my gallery @ [link] :thumb55092509: Short, and nice!
-- "Your Orwellian language notwithstanding- it's a fucking machine. It's a tool." -- I'm an admin for #theWrittenRevolution . The words are the spark. |
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