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You send shivers down my spine,
In a good way.

When you touch my bare skin,
It's Euphoric.

You're part of me forever,
I am your wife.

You are my reason to live,
And you are my husband.

-Tokyo Butterfly
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Written for my husband - who hates poetry. Our anniversay was a few days before.

The first line of each verse also make up their own poem as does the second line of each verse.


12th Sept 2009

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:iconlacolombededeuil:
:blackrose::blackrose::blackrose:

Sweetie this rocks! You got me with this one! I am featuring it on my Front Page under Art That Touches My Heart.

hugs,
katti
a humble poet
An Angel of Vengeance:blackrose:

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come and nestle thy wounded spirit in the feathers of my oasis and feel it
feel the softest lightest touch of soothing
hear the gentlest barely audible words of one who through them is renewing
all that life has cast thy way, this I vow, each night on
:icontokyobutterfly:
Wow! Thank you so much. That REALLY means a lot to me.

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:iconavorio-arte:
Very good! I can't see why your husband wouldn't love poetry!

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"One can only know how to live, if they know how to die," -Morrie
:icontokyobutterfly:
Me either. He puts me off writing to be honest. I'll write something and he's not keen on it so it gets scrapped as I then think that it probably isn't that good to begin with. :(

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:iconavorio-arte:
Believe in YOURSELF! Show your poetry! Don't go with this monstrosity!!!

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"One can only know how to live, if they know how to die," -Morrie
:icontokyobutterfly:
It's really nice to hear such encouraging comments. It's inspired me to write more because I can turn to your group to show poetry and hopefully the group will help me decide what's good and what's not. Winner all round!

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:iconavorio-arte:
hooray!

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"One can only know how to live, if they know how to die," -Morrie
:iconhtblack:
Short, and nice! :clap:

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"Your Orwellian language notwithstanding- it's a fucking machine. It's a tool."

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